Iron Curtis

Hey Johannes! thank you very much for your feedback and don't worry about the countryside setting, it made it all more human, and it felt a bit like an old friend was taking time to help me with my musical struggle :D I am happy to get an overall positive feedback but mostly because you addressed exactly the point for which i was doubting the most: alternative arrangement, lenght and effects use. You were asking yourself which were my references or inspirations. Definetly Chicago House but as well also detroit house and some more conteporary music producer who have a more melodical approach. But at the end it mostly comes from my hardware jams <3 I will definetly send you the final version!

Ah, thank you so much for the feedback! It is very considered and will be useful. I hadn't listened to the track in a couple of weeks, and I've just listened to it again (on headphones this time) and can hear the opportunities that you've spoken about (the dubby clap delays are not needed for this track), and I'm going to experiment and liven up the stripped back part (or remove it). Also my feedback on your feedback (as requested): thank you for mentioning the things you like about the track first - as you mentioned it can be hard to share things, so I appreciated those comments. And it was useful that you referenced timestamps a few times, that helped me understand exactly what you were talking about. Also, the other artists that you referenced will be useful - I know their names but I haven't listened to them so much, so I'm going to go and see if I can get some inspiration. Again, thank you very much 🙏🏻

Incredible feedback. Johannes gave me 25 minutes worth of notes, which is probably the most detailed feedback i've ever had from anyone in my life :) It's so valuable getting ears on your music from your favourite artists - I almost can't believe the price! Johannes you were 100% correct in your assessment of my musical taste/background just from listening to the track. You even identified your own track 'Lasga's Return' from over 10 years ago which was a direct inspiration - ok, maybe I ripped it off ;) - and the reason why I sent this to you. You specifically mentioned the bass, and it was your bassline that I was trying to emulate! Some of your suggestions I already had a little inkling about, so it's actually reassuring hearing those coming from a pro. Now if only I could find the original project file... I have a few other projects that I'd like your ears on too, so I look forward to submitting those for feedback soon.

The best feedback I could have hoped for! Very detailed, very respectful, great ideas and suggestions for improvement. Full recommendation!